初二下unit2作文解析ppt课件.ppt

这个春天，与你温暖相伴,WARM WITH YOU THIS SPRINGT composition,PPT by Tracy,作文中的错误,一，三单问题 错误表达：He like/love/help/volunteer.正确表达：He likes/loves/helps/volunteers.二 n单复数 错误表达：He loves animal.He volunteers to teach kid how to play soccer.正确表达：He loves animals.He volunteers to teach kids how to play soccer.三 时态一致性 错误表达：They are feeling happy because they helped people.He volunteers his time to work in a hospital and he got such a stong feeling of satisfaction.正确表达:They feel happy because they can help people.He volunteers his time to work in a hospital and he gets such a stong feeling of satisfaction.,四 be动词与动词原形连用的情况 错误表达：1）They are very like this school.2)He is plan to work in old peeples home.3)They are spend some hours every week.4)They are want to be a volunteer.正确表达：1）They like this school very(注意：不是every）much.2)He plans to work in old peeples home.3)They spend some hours every week.4)They want to be a volunteer.五 词语误用 1 favorite 错误表达：He favorites like animals.正确表达：He likes animals best.,2 volunteer 错误表达：He decided to volunteer after-school reading program.正确表达：He decided to volunteer in an after-school reading program.3 kindness 错误表达：Daniel is a kindness people.Peter is very kindness.正确表达：Daniel is a kind people.Peter is very kind.六 其他错误表达 1 They work as a volunteer.正确表达：They work as volunteers.2 The olds are lonely.正确表达：The old people are lonely.,思路：总分总：1 No.1 Middle School is proud of three students.They are Peter,Daniel and John.They give up several hours each week to helpe others.2 1)Peter:loves animals and wants to be an animal doctor volunteers at an animal hospital gets such a strong feeling of satisfaction 2)Danel:a book lover wants to help kids learn to read,as a result,volunteers at an after-school reading program.3)John:be strong in talking with old people.volunteer at old peoples home.we shoud care for old people.they are lonely3 The three boys feel very happy,because they can do what they love to do and help others at the same time.,No.1 Middle School is proud of three students.They are Peter,Daniel and John.They give up several hours each week to helpe others.Peter loves animals and wants to be an animal doctor.So he volunteers at an animal hospital.He can get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when he sees the animals get better.Daniel is a book lover.He can read by himself at the age of four.As a result,he volunteers at an after-school reading program.He helps kids learn to read.John is strong in talking with old people.So he volunteers at old peoples home.He reads newspapers to them and talks with them.He thinks we should care for the old becuase they are lonely.We are going to be old one day.The three boys feel very happy,because they can do what they love to do and help others at the same time.,