初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件.ppt
English writing,吉林市第五中学 王和彬,大作文复习策略 选题,人物故事自己，家人，朋友，老师学习提高学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦健康生活疾病和卫生，食品健康计划愿望暑假计划，学习计划,大作文复习策略 选题,快乐成长 个人爱好，兴趣 假日旅行计划要做的事情，旅游。情感表达对父母对老师感恩之情。,大作文复习策略 选题,环境保护志愿者活动，自然资源的保护安全问题疾病和卫生，食品健康等问题。观点态度提建议、劝告、号召,大作文,课标中的写作评价案例：1、My favorite season 开放性试题。考查学生的构思、信息组织和语言表达能力2、邀请某人去家里聚会，写一张便条，介绍路线、聚会内容等。半开放性试题。给出了提示，有要点，也有自由发挥的空间,写作步骤,审清主题：文章的中心、文体是什么。选择材料：材料为主题服务，量要充足。列好提纲：把材料整理得井然有序，计划好文章的整体结构。如：开头、结尾；分几段，用哪些材料等等。初写文章：语法正确、用词得当，语言地道检查修改：反复修改润色。准确抄写。,关键如何列好提纲,利弊型作文Micro blog的利与弊Para1:（综述）with the development of internet more and more popularPara2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,any time;Second,share with;Last,express views free,money-freePara3:（弊）However,one coin has two faces.On the one hand,a waste of timeaffect study;On the other hand,not safestolen,hurt feelingsPara4:（个人）As a student,make good use of it.,关键如何列好提纲,表达出很多人不同看法或观点：Most students think While 20%of them choose to.Another 15 believe There are also some saying that As a student,I agree to,关键如何列好提纲,解决问题型Recently,the problem has been more and more serious.should do something to solve it.Firstly,Secondly,Finally,I am sure if everyone can,the will become better and better.,常用连词,表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;not onlybut also;表示递进的：besides;whats more 表示原因的：because(of);thanks to表示结果的：so;as a result;sothat;表示目的的：so that;in order that/to;表示对比的：while;on the one hand+on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;preferto;would rather dothan do;,常用连词,表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：for example;for instance;such as;like;that is to say表示总结的：in a word;last;表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.;sth.;affect;have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;be interested in;show great interest in;lose oneself in;put ones heart into;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;,常用连词,表达个人想法的：I think/believe;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart其他：in general;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up ones mind to do;in a way;in a word,检查修改,用词方面是否正确句子写的是否恰当篇章方面是否严谨细节方面是否准确,举例,某报刊就Housework为题征文，请你投稿。谈谈你经常帮父母做的家务，都有什么体会，并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。提示词：family,lots of housework,learn to do,help,parents,feel proud of,举例 审清主题,人称：第一人称时态：一般现在时，一般将来时（个别使用一般过去时也可。）主题：做家务文体：记叙文,举例 选择单词材料,名词：chore,laundry,trash,living room,lifestyle,snack,party动词：try,keep,make,sweep,fold副词：sometimes,hardly ever,once,举例 列好提纲,分段：文章分为三段开头，提出housework，强调青少年应该帮家长做家务。提出主题。正文，我是怎样做的以及我的体会。围绕主题展开文章。结尾，说明做家务是对父母表达爱；说明今年暑假的打算。升华主题。,举例 初写文章,Every family has a lot of housework.In my opinion,teenagers are supposed to do some housework.,举例 初写文章,I often help my parents do some housework,such as sweeping the floor and do the laundry.I do housework at home every day.And I make my own bed after I get up at 6 every morning.I like doing housework because it can make me live on my own.Spending ten minutes sweeping the floor which is too easy for me can make my parents very happy.I hope my parents can relax and be happy at home.,举例 初写文章,Summer vacation is coming,I want to learn how to cook.I want to cook for them.I think they will feel proud of me.,人物故事类的一些句子感受,She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.Im always ready to help others when theyre in trouble.Shes so kind and friendly that she makes friends with each of her students.,校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师，以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括：1.对老师的相貌描写；2.喜欢老师的原因：讲课好、与学生交朋友,My Favorite Teacher Everyone has his or her favorite teacher at school,and so do I.My favorite teacher,Miss Lu,is a 30-year-old young lady of medium height,with big eyes and long straight hair.She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.And a big smile can always be found on her round face.,Maybe youll wonder why she is considered as my favorite teacher.Well,as our English teacher,she does a good job in her classes.I can easily understand everything she tells us.Another example is that shes so kind and friendly that she makes friends with each of her students.We like to share everything about our pleasure or problems in our school life with her.,All in all,I love Miss Lu so much.Whenever I think of her,a strong feeling of joy can always fill my heart!,预祝大家考试成功！,
