初一精品英语写作课ppt课件.pptx
How to write a good article,Robert Ruan,目标goals,了解英语书面表达的评分标准,01,掌握书面表达的类型及写作技巧,02,能够应用写作技巧及所学知识,完成书面表达的写作,03,01,中考英语书面表达的评分标准,第一档(13-15分)信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档(10-12分)信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。第三档(7-9分)能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。第四档(4-6分)只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。第五档(0-3分)只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。,隐藏的评分标准!,02,1、规范书写,字母饱满圆润,格式正确。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉。3、一旦写错,规范修改用一条斜线划掉即可。eg:He can speker speak English very well.,书写注意事项,英文字母实例,作文答题纸一般为单线,我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写,不要把它作为第四线,让字母吊在线上。,?,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分?,15,?,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分?,6,?,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分?,3,?,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分?,Remember!,We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high grade.,03,根据汉语提示完成作文,根据表格提示完成作文,书面表达常见题型,根据图片提示完成作文,04,写作策略,稿纸上完成,实例展示,My room,写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间,注意用到房间里的物品和位置,短文不少于40个单词,写作第一步,My room,认真审题,分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间,注意用到房间里的物品和位置,短文不少于40个单词,字数要求,文章体裁,主题,文章内容,写作第一步,My room,用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。,写作第一步,My room,Talk in your group介词或介词短语:on,Next to,Above,In front of关键句型:There be,I have,you can see,in,写作第三步,My room,将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整,符合表达习惯,写作第三步,My room,1,There is a big bed in my room 2,Above my bed is a map of China 3,Next to my bed is my bed stand4,I have a book case too,many books are on it.5,In front of the case,you can see my desk.,写作第四步,My room,恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步,My room,There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a bookcase,and many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.There is also a globe on the desk.,写作第五步,My room,修改词句,美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句,展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步,My room,My RoomThis is my room.There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.China is my Motherland.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a book case,many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.I like them very much.There is also a globe on the desk.This is my room.Do you like this room?,My RoomThis is my room.There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.China is my Motherland.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a book case,many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.I like them very much.There is also a globe on the desk.This is my room.Do you like this room?,Congratulations!,Oh,dont forget the last step!,将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上,一定注意书写的注意事项。,英语书面表达写作技巧回顾,最后抄在答题纸上,Practice,给你的朋友Mary写一封书信,向她介绍你的房间以及你的体育用品收藏(sports collection),不少于40词,范文,Dear Mary,This is a photo of my room.There is a big bed in my room.Next to the bed,you can see a bookcase.There are some things in it.I have a lot of sports collection.I have three baseballs,two basketballs and a ping-pong bat.I love sports!I want to play sports with you.Have a good day!yours xxx,Homework,假设你是李枚,下面的照片是你的全家福,请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。,