初一精品英语写作课ppt课件.pptx
How to write a good article,Robert Ruan,目标goals,了解英语书面表达的评分标准,01,掌握书面表达的类型及写作技巧,02,能够应用写作技巧及所学知识，完成书面表达的写作,03,01,中考英语书面表达的评分标准,第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（0-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,隐藏的评分标准！,02,1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉。3、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划掉即可。eg:He can speker speak English very well.,书写注意事项,英文字母实例,作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。,？,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,15,？,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,6,？,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,3,？,单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,Remember！,We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high grade.,03,根据汉语提示完成作文,根据表格提示完成作文,书面表达常见题型,根据图片提示完成作文,04,写作策略,稿纸上完成,实例展示,My room,写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间，注意用到房间里的物品和位置，短文不少于40个单词,写作第一步,My room,认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间，注意用到房间里的物品和位置，短文不少于40个单词,字数要求,文章体裁,主题,文章内容,写作第一步,My room,用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。,写作第一步,My room,Talk in your group介词或介词短语:on，Next to，Above，In front of关键句型：There be，I have，you can see,in,写作第三步,My room,将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯,写作第三步,My room,1，There is a big bed in my room 2,Above my bed is a map of China 3,Next to my bed is my bed stand4,I have a book case too,many books are on it.5,In front of the case,you can see my desk.,写作第四步,My room,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步,My room,There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a bookcase，and many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.There is also a globe on the desk.,写作第五步,My room,修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步,My room,My RoomThis is my room.There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.China is my Motherland.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a book case，many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.I like them very much.There is also a globe on the desk.This is my room.Do you like this room?,My RoomThis is my room.There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.China is my Motherland.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a book case，many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.I like them very much.There is also a globe on the desk.This is my room.Do you like this room?,Congratulations!,Oh,dont forget the last step!,将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上，一定注意书写的注意事项。,英语书面表达写作技巧回顾,最后抄在答题纸上,Practice,给你的朋友Mary写一封书信，向她介绍你的房间以及你的体育用品收藏（sports collection），不少于40词,范文,Dear Mary,This is a photo of my room.There is a big bed in my room.Next to the bed,you can see a bookcase.There are some things in it.I have a lot of sports collection.I have three baseballs,two basketballs and a ping-pong bat.I love sports!I want to play sports with you.Have a good day!yours xxx,Homework,假设你是李枚，下面的照片是你的全家福，请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。,
