托福写作常见问题.doc

托福写作常见问题 托福写作高分虽然比较困难，但是只要大家能避开一些写作中常见问题，写作肯定会有不错的提升。哪些是托福写作中常见的问题呢?下面就和大家分享托福写作总是与高分无缘，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作总是与高分无缘?这些常见问题一定要避免一.托福写作中常见问题托福写作中不少考生的作文整体语言简单，或者偏口语化，却掺杂了数个SAT阅读词汇，读来别扭也就是学生粗浅地知其大概中文意思，但根据中文意思再放到写作里头便出现了不和谐，甚至是完全错误的用法。托福写作中还有的考生犯得是混合错误：正式语言与非正式语言反差过大，现代英语中掺杂古英语或旧式英语;另一个是词语搭配错误。这亦是国内托福考生普遍的问题所在。二.托福写作正确备考方法1.托福写作官方要求我们一定要注意到，托福写作是应用写作(practical writing)，非创造性写作(creative writing)，即考察学生的语言表述能力，而不是文学创作能力。无论是综合写作还是独立写作，考生追求的基本目标是把想说的意思用书面英语表达清楚，让阅卷人读懂和明白。从语言角度来说，有两大标准，即准确性和多样化。能够达到词词准确，又使用到不同的词句来表达相同、相似的意思，从语言角度来说已经符合托福考试的高分要求。2.准确性先来说说准确性。譬如这样一个句子：My writing ability increased by reading many books. 拆开来看，每个英文单词对应的中文意思是对的。那么，词语的搭配如何检验呢?在各种班型的培训课程中，老师固然会提到一些典型搭配。但更为重要的是考生自己掌握检验的方法。我个人比较推荐Oxford Learners English Collocation Dictionary(牛津学生英语搭配词典)，其中的语料*和实用性都比较好。3.多样化关于多样化，举个最普遍的例子：“more and more”这个短语几乎是每个中国学生都使用过的短语。我看到过太多学生的独立写作*，三四百字的短文里出现了四五次。有学生在开头段便使用了三次。学生重复使用该短语是可以理解的，一个是熟悉，再来字数似乎上去了。其实，稍加思考便知道，如此做法反而在*开头便向阅卷人暴露了弱处。因此这种不顾语言质量的“凑字数”方法是不可取的。如何解决语言单一的问题?平日积累是必不可少的。而积累的最好方法就是阅读和仿写。阅读的材料有几大注意点：一、选择现代英语，简而言之，选择至少五十年以内的材料。读莎翁很好，但忌讳盲目模仿。二、题材上尽量选择essay(散文、评论性*、短文尤佳)。不少学生喜欢看Twilight之类的的幻想小说，这对培养阅读兴趣和语感很好，但对托福写作的帮助不直接。Twilight之类属于创造性写作，即文学写作，其语境和托福考试需要的议论文有很大差别，即便学到很炫的词句，但恐无用武之地。托福写作常见问题也是大部分考生在备考中会有的共性问题，希望大家在备考的时候能够多注意，避免这些问题，写作的时候按照官方要求，准确用词，保证词汇使用多样化，这样才能在写作中拿到高分。托福写作范文：时代差异Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.Generational differences have always happened throughout history but some differences have come more rapidly and widely in the modern era because in part of technological and social changes. There are obvious differences between generations with respects to such matters as musical tastes, fashion trends, educational systems, cultures, lifestyles, politics and even attitudes toward sexual activities. It is particularly interesting to compare our generation with our parents generation in subjects related to work and family.Lets begin with the generation X as our generation, coming after the generation "baby boomers." The mainstream Xers are mostly not as workaholic as their parents when younger. The reduced number of working hours is just one example. While the boomers are good team players and love the social interaction at work, their offsprings are more skeptical, stressing personal merits instead of antiquity. Unlike their previous generation, however, the younger generation is more inclined to change jobs or have parallel careers, if only for financial reasons. On the other hand, they demand more time for themselves, their families and friends. Boomers are relatively more conservative in comparison with their more liberal sons and daughters who are looking for more work-life balance.Along with the reduced working time, the size of family has gradually been reduced, one-child or two-child program becoming more common. It used to be larger families among boomers. Our generation allows formal marriages and co-habitations to exist side by side. An increasing percentage of divorces and separations have appeared in our generation than in our parents generation. More young women work and parenting has become a problem of the family. Teen-age pregnancy without a ring is no longer a scandal as was in our parents generation. Pre-marital sex was considered dirty when air and water were cleaner in our parents generation, and in the generations before them.Our parents generation, in particular, has a complaint to make. They say when they were younger, there was no respect for youth. Now that they are old, there is not respect for age. If this could be justified, what would become of our childrens generation. The millennial will have little patience. The new reality in generational differences would certainly surprise our parents generation, let alone the generation before them, the era of "veterans".托福写作：题目分类如何细化托福写作题目分类如何细化?托福作文题目的难度体现主要就是在作文题目越来越抽象，越来越不容易想到理由。其实，当面对这些题目的时候，很多人总会把自己投入一个怪圈，单纯的死扣这个问题，而不是试图将它扩展或者细化。作文忌讳的就是就事论事，不作任何扩展。当不作任何扩展的时候，也就是不做任何细化的时候，其实不惯是老托福还是新托福，一个寻找作文理由的利器就是细化。所谓细化，就是不要拘泥于单纯的题目。一定要进行举例!比如说：20XX年02月11日独立作文题目(更正版本)：Do you agree or disagree the following statement: Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.与20XX年02月05日中国大陆独立作文题目：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?第一个题目，大家都觉得很空，“领导力”到底该怎么找理由，完全没有头绪。第二个题目，也是一样的，“具有挑战性的梦想”与“现实的目标”感觉远不如老托福里面的“是否建立工厂”好想理由。托福写作常见问题