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建议信,作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。写给个人的建议信，通常是就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；写给某个组织和机构建议信，是就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。通常包括：1. 说明写信目的。2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。,文体概述,假设你是李华，你的好朋友小明将要参加他学校举办的英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。1.说明回信的意图；2.向小明提出建议；3.预祝小明比赛成功。,Dear Xiaoming,Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to prepare the English speech contest. Here are a few suggestions.First of all, its important to get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, dont be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Wish you success in the speech!Yours, Li Hua,常用语块1.给某人提建议2. 向某人征求意见3. 听从某人的建议4. 如下 5. 利用 6. 制定具体的计划,make use of,give sb. some advice (on),as follows,make a specific plan,ask sb. for some advice,take/follow sb.s suggestions,7. 采取有效的措施 8. 摆脱9. 对.保持乐观10. 培养好习惯11. 认为有用 12. 把考虑在内 13. 得到改善 14. 依我看来,develop good habits,take effective measures,get rid of,be optimistic about.,find sth. helpful/ useful/ beneficial,take sth. into account/consideration,get improved,in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view,套用句式1. 我写信是和你分享我的建议的。2. 我已收到你的来信，得知你最近在学习上碰到一些困难。3. 你就如何与舍友们相处向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。,After reading your letter, I am sorry to know that you have some difficulty with your study recently.,Im writing to share my suggestions with you .,You have asked me for advice concerning how to get along with your roommates and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.,4. 我觉得如果能够跟你妈妈面对面谈谈你的烦恼，这将会很有帮助的。5. 当涉及到这种情况，我想建议你先冷静下来。6. 在我看来，你应该理智的采取以下措施：首先，. 其次，. 还有，.。,I think it will be very helpful/useful if you can have a face-to-face talk with your mother about your worries.,As far as Im concerned, its wise for you to take measures as follows. To begin with, . In addition, . Whats more, .,When it comes to this situation, I suggest you should calm down first.,7. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。8. 如果你考虑我的建议的话，我将不胜感激。,I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.,I would appreciate if you could take my suggestions into consideration/ account.,【模拟真题】假如你是李华，你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对以下问题提出几点合理的建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜式单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意： 1. 词数100左右。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Principal,Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows.Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.,As far as Im concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of all, its suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, its better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!,【课外练习】假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上， 你看到如下的内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteen-year old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However, I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议。,Hi, Sad Mother,I have learned that your daughter told lies to you. As a peer of your daughter, I think the reasons are as follows.To begin with, maybe the reason why your daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she has no choice but to lie.,Here are some suggestions for you. First of all, youd better have a heart-to-heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, dont be too strict. Its suggested that you should allow her to make some minor mistakes.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.,假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Teddy来信向你倾诉烦恼：他的父亲打算下学期让他住校，但是他更想继续住在家里，于是双方起了争执。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 对他表示安慰； 2.表明你对住校与否的看法，并给出相应的理由； 3.给他一些实际的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Teddy,From your letter I know that you and your father are having an argument._Yours truly,Li Hua,Dear Teddy,From your letter I know that you and your father are hving an argument. That must have made you very unhappy. But after considering the advantages of living in school, you may change your mind and understand your fathers intention. Firstly, you can learn to live on your own and become independent. Thats the quality everyone needs before stepping into the society. Besides, everything about your study becomes convenient. And you can stick to your friends any time. Isnt that great? If you really miss your home, you can go home every weekend. But you will enjoy staying at school soon. Trust me.Yours truly,Li Hua,假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点如下：1. 表示你的理解，2. 鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念。2. 就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Jenny, I am so glad to have a talk with you._ _Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li Hua,Dear Jenny, I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.,Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. In addtion, I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li Hua,假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一封回信。要点如下：1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。2. Lora父母不同意的理由。3. 你给Lora的具体建议。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Lora, I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents dont allow you to do so. I understand your situation. I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps theyd like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.,