英语七年级写作训练ppt课件何少琼.ppt

English Writing,七年级写作训练,Hello, Im Kitty. Nice to meet you!,Where is Kitty?,_the box,in,_the box,on,_the box,next to,_the box,above,_the bed,under,My Bedroom,Whats +介词短语.?,There is/are,Writing,要求： 仔细观察图片，以“My Bedroom”为题目写一篇短文，用 There be 句型描述图片中的物品，至少写出5句话。,Have a try,My Bedroom,Showing Time,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a desk in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the desk. There is a TV on the desk. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,Passage:,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a desk in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the desk. There is a TV on the desk. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,Practice:,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a desk in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the desk. There is a TV on the desk. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,Use “and”：,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a desk in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the desk. There is a TV on the desk. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,You can ask:,Whats next to the table? There is a chair.,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a desk in the bedroom. Whats next to the desk? There is a chair. There is a TV on the desk. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,Read：,We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts.,Make the passage better and better(使文章更好),Beginning,The structure of a good passage(好文章的结构),My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a desk in the bedroom. Whats next to the desk? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the desk. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,My Bedroom,This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,Beginning,Ending,Beginning,Body,Ending,总领全文引出话题,分层描述诠释主题,总结全文深化主题,Each part is: (文章各段的作用）,2. We can write a better beginning.,Make the passage better and better(使文章更好),We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts.,My Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,1、Topic Sentence 主题句法,Kinds of beginning,2、Ask a question 提问式,My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me!,Kinds of beginning,3. We can write a better ending.,Make the passage better and better(使文章更好),We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts.,2. We can write a better beginning.,My Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.,1、Topic Sentence -总结主题,Kinds of ending,Two kinds of ending,1、Topic Sentence -总结主题,2、Ask a question 提问式,My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me! There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. Do you like my bedroom? Can you introduce yours to me?,Which is better? Why?,Your idea:,Correct Expression 语言准确 Right Logic Mind 逻辑合理3.Smooth Flow 条理清晰4. Diverse Sentence Patterns 句式多样5. Complete Structure 结构完整,加点儿啥？多加一些增添色彩的句子层次感、深度的问题,Summy:,Topic,My Bedroom,Beginning,Do you want to look at my bedroom. .,Body,There is/are.Whats.?Can you.? .,Ending,Do you like.? Can you.?,心中有图心中有词心中有方位、次序增添色彩句子,Homework,要求： 1、仔细观察自己的学校，以“My School”为题目，写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整的短文。 2、字数不得少于50词。,