定语从句在英语写作中的运用课件.ppt

in Writing,Attributive Clauses,定语从句在英语写作中的运用,Our Aims,Combine sentences with the attributive clause.,Today, we are going to ,2. Make sentences with the attributive clause.,基本句型强化,Harry Porter is a boy. He has a scar on his forehead.,Harry Porter is a boy _,who has a scar on his forehead.,Harry Porter is a boy, he has a scar on his forehead.,Guangzhou is a beautiful city _ _.,Guangzhou is a beautiful city.,It develops fast.,which /that develops fast,1. The amber was selected.,2. The amber had a yellow-brown color like honey.,The amber which was selected had a beautiful yellow-brown color like honey.,1.The amber room was decorated with gold and jewels.2. It took the artists ten years to make.The amber room was decorated with gold and jewels, which took the artists ten years to make.,1.The amber room belonged to Frederick William I.2. Frederick William I gave the amber room to Peter the Great.Frederick William I, _ _the amber room belonged, gave it to the Peter the Great.,Frederick William I,Peter the Great,to whom,Catherine had the Amber Room moved to a palace outside St Petersburg.She spent her summers in the palace.,Catherine,St Petersburg,Catherine had the Amber Room moved to a palace outside St Petersburg, _ she spent her summers.,where,能力提升,1. A man is writing on the wall.,The man _is writing on the wall.,who is in red,The man is picking up the rubbish. The rubbish is thrown by the tourists.,The man is picking up the rubbish_ is thrown by the tourists.,which,Our class is a big family ; It is made up of 28 girls and 24 boys. Most of them are hard-working students. But our class is not united at present. It is not the best class. We should remember: Union is the most important factor for a team . The team wants to be the best.,Our class is a big family _is made up of 27 girls and 24 boys, most _ _ are hard-working students. But our class , _ is not united at present, is not the best one. We should remember : Union is the most important factor for a team _ wants to be the best.,定语从句的运用,which,of whom,which,which,Our class is a big family ; It is made up of 28 girls and 24 boys. Most of them are hard-working students. The leaders of the class have done a lot for our class. They are very kind. We all like them.,Our class is a big family _is made up of 27 girls and 24 boys, most _ _ are hard-working students. The leaders of the class have done a lot for our class. They are such kind leaders _ we all like.,定语从句的运用,which,of whom,as,走进高考,2009年广东高考基础写作主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数： 世界第一Slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, _ranks the first in the world.,which,2010年广东高考基础写作以下是关于中国政府决定禁烟报道的主要内容,二手烟：second-hand smoke请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，,My country begins to carry out the policy _ prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011.,that,相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分 布：男性75;女性：25（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年 Recently China has about 350 million smokers, _75% are men and 25% are women.,among whom, Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, _causes 100,000 deaths per year.,which,Thirty volunteers _ are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015.,2013年广东高考基础写作请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。志愿者的选拔到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星的志愿者。志愿者的条件：至少18岁；,who,单元话题写作,在山西大同市的云冈石窟，建造于北魏朝代，是世界上最珍贵的文化遗址之一。不幸的是，这些年，在石窟里的佛像已经被工业粉尘严重破坏。必须马上采取行动保护石窟和石像。污染严重的工厂应该被搬走，在石像的周围，玻璃墙应该被建造。如果人们足够关注，石窟很快就可以呈现新的面貌。,参考词汇：粉尘 dust 佛像 Buddha statues,在山西大同市的云冈石窟，建造于北魏朝代，是世界上最珍贵的文化遗址之一。不幸的是，这些年，在石窟里的佛像已经被工业粉尘严重破坏。必须马上采取行动保护石窟和石像。污染严重的工厂应该被搬走，在石像的周围，玻璃墙应该被建造。如果人们足够关注，石窟很快就可以呈现新的面貌。,参考词汇：粉尘 dust 佛像 Buddha statues,在山西大同市的云冈石窟，建造于北魏朝代，是世界上最珍贵的文化遗址之一。不幸的是，这些年，在石窟里的佛像已经被工业粉尘严重破坏。必须马上采取行动保护石窟和石像。污染严重的工厂应该被搬走，在石像的周围，玻璃墙应该被建造。如果人们足够关注，石窟很快就可以呈现新的面貌。,参考词汇：粉尘 dust 佛像 Buddha statues,在山西大同市的云冈石窟，建造于北魏朝代，是世界上最珍贵的文化遗址之一。 The Yungang Caves in Datong, Shanxi Province, which were built during the Northern Wei Dynasty, is one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world. 4. 污染严重的工厂应该被搬走，在石像的周围，玻璃墙应该被建造。 The factories which produce heavy pollution should be removed, and glass walls should be built around the statues.,Lucky Time,在山西大同市的云冈石窟，建造于北魏朝代，是世界上最珍贵的文化遗址之一。不幸的是，这些年，在石窟里的佛像已经被工业粉尘严重破坏。必须马上采取行动保护石窟和石像。污染严重的工厂应该被搬走，在石像的周围，玻璃墙应该被建造。如果人们足够关注，石窟很快就可以呈现新的面貌。,参考词汇：粉尘 dust 佛像 Buddha statues,Homework,2. 不幸的是，这些年，在石窟里的佛像已经被工业粉尘严重破坏。 Unfortunately, the ancient Buddha statues in the caves have been badly damaged by industry dust in recent years. 3. 必须马上采取行动保护石窟和石像。 Action must be taken to protect the caves and statues.5. 如果人们足够关注，石窟很快就可以呈现新的面貌。If enough attention is paid, the caves will take on a new look soon.,The Yungang Caves in Datong, Shanxi Province, which were built during the Northern Wei Dynasty, is one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world. Unfortunately, the ancient Buddha statues in the caves have been badly damaged by industry dust in recent years. Action must be taken to protect the caves and statues. The factories which produce heavy pollution should be moved away, and glass walls should be built around the statues. If enough attention is paid, the caves will take on a new look soon.,