作文读后续写ppt课件.pptx
,After-reading Writing,读后续写: 提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）,新高考考试说明,A story,when,where,who,what,how,why,Step 1. Read for basic information,Step 1. Read for basic information,when：where：who:what：how:why:,on Arthurs way to work,along the Park Avenue near the First national Bank,Arthur, the young man,a long loud noise of an alarm from the bank,?,Step 1. Read for basic information,Clues：,Arthur遇到年轻人,帮忙拿行李,突然银行警报声,抢劫案,人们喧嚣声,Arthur感到惊慌,迅速逃跑,Step 2. Read for plot development clues(情节发展线索),Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:,Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”,Para2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,_ is inside the suitcase?,What,Step 3. Predict possible plot development,In a group predict how the story will develop:,(tone: funny a happy ending),money,other things,Para.1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”,Para.2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),Para.1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),Arthur突然意识到 年轻人 银行抢劫犯 Arthur快跑 出租车 警察局,the young man,the bank thief,Para.1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),he realized that the young man may be the bank thief ran faster and stopped a taxi he told the driver to go to the nearest police station,Para.2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),Arthur到了警察局 描述银行抢劫和年轻人 年轻人追到警察局 手提箱内物品 Arthur很尴尬 警察感谢Arthur,the bank,the young man,suitcase,Para.2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),went into the police stationdescribed what had happened near the bank/a young man had robbed the bankthe young man arrived at the police station hurriedlyopened the suitcase and found thatArthur felt embarrassed but the policeman thanked him,Sharing your version,Step 5. Check and copy your version(检查誊写),Grammatical mistakes Punctuation The five underlined words or phrases,Step 5. Check and copy your version(检查誊写),Para.1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” Thinking of the way the young man had behaved, he realized the young man might be the bank thief. So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi. The moment he got into the taxi, he told the driver the shouting man behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station. The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.,Step 5. Check and copy your version(检查誊写),Para.2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. thanked the driver and directly went in. Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on the Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police, he heard a voice outside, “Help! Help!” To the surprise of Arthur, it was the young man. He had followed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes. Arthur felt embarrassed but the policeman thanked him anyway.,Practice,On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.,Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.,注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.,Steps for after-reading writing: Step 1. Read for basic information When? Where? Who? What? Why? How? The clues of the story: Step 2. Read for plot development clues The top sentences given Step 3. Predict possible plot development The underlined words Step 4. Draft a continuation The clues of the continuation: Step 5. Check and copy your version,A story,when,where,who,what,how,why,Step 1. Read for basic information,Step 1. Read for basic information,when： On a bright, warm July afternoonwhere： from his home to Alaskawho: Mac and his friends, Paul and Beekywhat：Mac came across a wolf and escaped from ithow: ?why: ?,Step 1. Read for basic information,Clues：,Mac 和朋友骑行,朋友自行车坏了,Mac 单独骑行,路遇一匹狼,被狼追赶，拼命逃脱,用防熊喷雾驱赶,Paul和Beeky开车经过,Step 2. Read for plot development clues(情节发展线索),Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:,Para1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.,Para2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.,Paul and Beeky,What did they do ? How did they manage to do it?,save Mac,actions,千钧一发,When the two friends arrived, what did they do?Give an ending to the story.,Step 3. Predict possible plot development,In a group predict how the story will develop:,Paul and Beeky,Para.1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.,Para.2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),Para.1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),Mac冲向车门 狼继续攻击 使用喷雾 Paul和Beeky帮忙 Mac上车 (狼离开),Mac,wolf,Paul,climb,Para.1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the carthe wolf caught up and attackedbear spray saved himPaul opened the door/attack the wolf withMac climbed into the car,Para.2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),朋友一起来帮助驱赶狼 拿肉朝狼扔去 狼得到肉的反应 Mac道谢 受伤回家,friend,home,Para.2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.,Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇),one of the friend picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolfran into the forest Mac thanked Paul and Beekyinjured, gave up their journey and returned home,Sharing your version,Step 5. Check and copy your version(检查誊写),Grammatical mistakes Punctuation The five underlined words or phrases,Step 5. Check and copy your version(检查誊写),Para.1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly opened the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily.,Step 5. Check and copy your version(检查誊写),Para.2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They shocked at what they saw and joined Paul. One of Macs friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. Mac thanked Paul and Beeky, “How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that Im still alive.” As Mac got injured, the three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.,
