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GRE写作：必备的经典句型 想要在GRE作文中拿高分，就必须得掌握这些经典句型，今天给大家带来GRE写作：必备的经典句型，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。GRE写作：必备的经典句型KNOWLEDGE 知识篇Activity is the only road to knowledge .(George Bernard Shaw , British dramatist)行动是通往知识的唯一道路 。 (英国剧作家 肖伯纳。 G.)A free man obtains knowledge from many sources 1 besides books .(Thomas Jefferson , American president)一个自由的人除了从书本上获取知识外，还可以从许多别的*获得知识。(美国总统 杰斐逊 。 T.)A great part to the information I have was acquired by looking up something and finding something else on the way 。(Adams Franklin , American humorist )我的大部分知识都是这样获得的：在寻找某个资料时意外的发现了另上的资料。(美国幽默作家 富兰克林。 A.)If a man empties his purse into his head , no man can take it away from him , an investment in knowledge always pays the best interest .(Benjamin Franklin , American president )倾已所有追求知识，没有人能夺走它;向知识投资，收益最佳。(美国总统 富兰克林。 B.)Imagination is more important than knowledge .(Albert Einstein , American scientist )想象力比知识更为重要。 (美国科学家 爱因斯坦 A. )Knowledge is power. (Francis Bacon , British philosopher )知识就是力量。 英国哲学家 培根。 F.The empty vessels make the greatest sound . (William Shakespeare , British dramatist )满瓶不响，半瓶咣当。 (英国剧作家 莎士比亚。 W.)EDUCATION 教育篇And gladly would learn , and gladly teach .( Chaucer , British poet)勤于学习的人才能乐意施教。(英国诗人，乔叟)Better be unborn than untaught , for ignorance is the root of misfortune 。(Plato , Ancient Greek philosopher)与其不受教育，不如不生，因为无知是不幸的根源。(古希腊哲学家 柏拉图)Genius17 without education is like silver in the mine. (Benjamin Franklin , American president )未受教育的天才，犹如矿中之银。 (美国总统 富兰克。 B.)The roots of education are bitter , but the fruit is sweet .(Aristotle , Ancient Greek philosopher )教育的根是苦的，但其果实是甜的。(古希腊哲学家 亚里士多德)GRE写作满分范文赏析"Our?declining?environment?may?bring?the?people?of?the?world?together?as?no?politician,?philosopher,?or?war?ever?could.?Environmental?problems?are?global?in?scope?and?respect?no?nations?boundaries.?Therefore,?people?are?faced?with?the?choice?of?unity?and?cooperation?on?the?one?hand?or?disunity?and?a?common?tragedy?on?the?other."?In?todays?society?we?spend?to?much?time?addressing?issues?that?will?not?prepare?us?for?the?trials?and?tributlations?facing?our?young?people.?For?example,?there?is?a?war?on?drugs?that?is?effecting?every?family?in?america,?without?any?consideration?for?race,?gender,?or?enthic?background.?This?country?needs?to?develop?a?systerm?on?how?to?deal?with?this?ongoing?problem?effecting?americans.?There?are?certain?issues?that?constantly?take?center?stage?in?america;?for?example?race?relations?has?return?to?the?horrible?days?of?the?fifiths.?There?is?know?doubt?that?we?are?facing?troubling?times,?and?we?are?not?paying?attention?to?what?is?going?on.?We?need?to?get?back?to?our?value?systerm,?family,?work,?church,?and?responsibility?and?emphasis?to?our?children?the?importancy?of?education?and?respect?of?others.?If?we?provide?a?healthy?model?we?can?help?curve?the?violence?and?mayheam?the?that?is?destroying?our?schools,?cities?and?states.?Finally,?if?we?are?proud?of?being?americans,?less?take?this?problem?and?do?something?about?it?by?diversity?training?and?multi-?cultural?activities.?Sincerely,?Comments:?This?is?not?a?coherent?discussion?of?the?issue.The?writer?seems?to?define?"environment"?broadly,?though?vaguely,?as?the?"cultural?environment."?While?the?idea?that?environmental?problems?are?fundamentally?cultural?in?origin?could?be?the?basis?for?a?promising?essay,?this?response?does?not?coherently?develop?that?idea.?Moreover,?the?writer?does?not?address?the?issues?claims?about?international?cooperation.?Instead?the?essay?jumps?from?problem?to?problem?without?adequately?describing?those?problems.?For?example,?"the?war?on?drugs"?is?referred?to?as?a?problem,?but?it?is?not?clear?whether?it?is?law?enforcements?"war"?on?drugs?or?peoples?use?of?drugs?that?is?the?issue.?Numerous?errors?interfere?with?comprehension,?including?errors?in?word?usage?("emphasis?to?our?children,"?"less?take?this?problem")?and?grammar?("race?relations?has?return?to").?Finally,?the?essay?ends?with?a?closing?("Sincerely")?that?is?more?appropriate?for?a?letter?than?an?analytical?essay.?GRE写作满分范文赏析"Our?declining?environment?may?bring?the?people?of?the?world?together?as?no?politician,?philosopher,?or?war?ever?could.?Environmental?problems?are?global?in?scope?and?respect?no?nations?boundaries.?Therefore,?people?are?faced?with?the?choice?of?unity?and?cooperation?on?the?one?hand?or?disunity?and?a?common?tragedy?on?the?other."?Environmental?problems?will?require?a?joint?efferct?amoung?people?to?solve,?however,?environmental?problems?may?not?cause?people?to?come?together.?Should?the?problems?continue?for?an?extended?period?of?time?before?any?effert?is?made?to?solve?them,?they?will?reach?a?point?of?no?return?no?matter?how?people?come?together?to?work?on?it.?When?this?happens?there?will?be?increased?shortage?in?our?natural?resouses.?As?supply?of?our?resouces?goes?down?and?demand?remains?the?same?or?goes?up?there?will?be?increased?presure?to?claim?what?resouces?remain.?So?instead?of?people?working?together?to?solve?the?problem,?they?will?be?fighting?for?whats?left?by?the?problem.?To?solve?this,?people?need?to?come?together?before?the?problem?reaches?a?state?of?no?return.?This?may be?hard?to?do?since?the?effects?of?environmental?problems?are?not?yet?felt?by?a?large?degree?(if?felt?at?all)?by?everyone.?At?this?point?in?time?many?feel?it?is?not?there?problem?to?worry?about?since?it?does?not?immediatly?effect?them.?To?remidy?this?people?should?become?more?aware?of?their?current?environment.?Comments:?This?response?is?seriously?flawed.?Its?strongest?feature?is?a?fairly?clear?position:?it?agrees?with?the?claim?that?environmental?problems?will?require?cooperation?and?presents?a?scenario?for?what?will?happen?if?there?is?no?cooperation?-?conflict?over?diminishing?resources.?However,?the?writer?offers?little?support?for?that?position.?Threatened?"resources"?and?the?"effects?of?environmental?problems"?are?mentioned?but?not?specified,?and?the?paper?provides?no?examples?of?how?people?might?"come?together"?to?address?the?problem?or?how?they?might?"become?more?aware?of?their?current?environment."?Some?of?the?sentences?are?worded?clearly?("So?instead?of?people?working?together?"),?but?others?are?so?flawed?by?imprecise?word?choice?that?the?meaning?is?difficult?to?understand:?"t?yet?felt?by?a?large?degree?(if?felt?at?all)?by?everyone."?Also,?run-on?sentences?(the?first?sentence,?for?example)?and?unclear?pronoun?references?add?to?the?confusion,?reinforcing?the?score?of?2.?GRE写作：必备的经典句型