写作 咨询信ppt课件.pptx
高一英语写作（3）,- 咨询信,书面表达假如你是李华，一名即将高中毕业的中国学生，你打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2018的课程学习，向其负责人Smith先生咨询培训的有关信息。（1）课程安排：课程安排的细节、课程的数量及科目（2）住宿情况：住校内还是校外租房（3）周末活动：是否有时间参观名胜古迹【写作要求】1必须包括所给要点，但不要逐条翻译。 2. 词数:100左右。,Step1. 审题 体裁： 人称： 时态： 结构：,咨询信第一人称一般现在时分为三段，重点是第二段,Mind map,Para.1,Para.2,Para.3,自我介绍+写信目的,课程安排,住宿情况,周末情况,希望得到回复，表示感谢,重点,Step2. 理清思路，列出要点1）核心要点2）表达成句（套用句型）,Para1: 我是李华，一名即将高中毕业的中国学生，我打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2018的课程学习。我写信来咨询培训的有关信息。,graduate fromplan to apply for the Summer Session 2018. I am writing to inquire about relevant information,Para2: （1）课程安排：课程安排的细节、课程的数量及科目（2）住宿情况：住校内还是校外租房（3）周末活动：是否有时间参观名胜古迹, get some details ofcourse arrangement 课程安排 subjects 科目live on campus rent houses outside the school visit places of interests on weekends,Para3:希望得到回复，表示感谢,Id be grateful ,Step2. 理清思路，列出建议结合理由2）表达成句（套用句型）,Firstly, Secondly, / In addition, Last but not least/ Finally/ Most importantly,Step3. 成篇,Step4. 修改润色，工整规范抄写,普遍问题：1、原文信息点问题2、 词汇问题（拼写错误、使用不当等）3、语法错误4、连接词使用不当5、得体性欠缺,1、原文信息点问题即将高中毕业Mr. Smith (I am writing to inquire about relevant information from Mr. Smith.)2、 词汇问题（拼写错误、使用不当等） information grateful inquire course arrangement interesting writing,3、语法错误I am grateful for youAre we live on campus or ?I want to know where are we living .I wonder the details of ,we are,Do,to,I would like to know/I want to ask for ,I wondered what that noise was.I wonder whether/ if you are free on Sunday.We all wondered at his rudeness. (惊讶) the Seven Wonders of the World 世界七大奇迹,4、连接词使用不当at first firstly / firstat last finally,at first 一开始，起初的时候At first I was nervous, but I soon started to relax.At first we used hand tools. Later we had machines. at last 最后，终于 （指经过周折、等待、耽搁后的“最后、终于”）= in the endAt last, he passed thee exam. finally (1) = at last/ in the end (2) 表先后顺序 （如同 first, second, third, last）Finally Id like to thank you all for helping me .,5、得体性欠缺1）I hope you can answer my questions.Please say more about I hope you can reply me soon.,Dear Mr. Smith, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. Ill graduate from high school this year and Im planning to apply for the Summer Session 2018. Now Im writing to inquire about several questions concerned. To start with, Id like to get some details of the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Additionally, I wonder if all the students live on campus or we shall rent houses outside the school. My utmost concern is to see whether Ill have time to visit some places of interest in America on weekends. Id be greatly grateful if you could provide me with the relevant material regarding the above aspects. Sincerely yours,Li Hua,
