大学英语四级辅导 作文部分ppt课件.ppt

大学英语四级辅导,作文部分,录,目,01,写作要求,03,趋势分析,05,写作结构,02,评分标准,04,题材分类,06,写作模板,07,范文学习,写作要求,01,达到教学要求中的一般要求，即：能完成一般性写作任务。能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等。能写常见的应用文。能在半小时内就一般性话题或提纲写出不少于120词的短文。内容基本完整，中心思想明确，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。,切题,形式,内容,段落、字数、 文体、格式,表达清楚、条理清晰,主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。,文字通顺，连贯性较好,基本无语言错误,考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀,语法,拼写,02,评分标准,03,趋势分析,2017.6,advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer,2016.12,to find a job or to start a business,2015.12,Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen.,2015.6,应用文,议论文-对比选择型,议论文-原因解释型,议论文-图片描述型,03,趋势分析,2014.12,A course that has impressed you most in college.,2014.6,Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the mostinteresting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?,2013.12,2013.6,议论文-原因解释型,议论文-原因解释型,议论文-利弊分析型,议论文-图片描述型,03,趋势分析,2012.12,2012.6,1. 许多商品都存在过度包装的现象2. 出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为,on excessive packaging,议论文-图表作文,议论文-提纲,04,题材分类,议论文,应用文,记叙文,对比选择型,原因解释型,利弊分析型,问题解决型,05,写作结构,主题段,扩展段,终结段,主题句（第1句）,扩展句（1-2句）,终结句（引出下文）,1 （主题句+扩展句）,2 （主题句+扩展句）,3 （主题句+扩展句）,主题句（第1句）,扩展句,终结句（最后一句）,过渡词,过渡词,逻辑词,逻辑词,逻辑词,Key to SuccessIn such a compatitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful. But how to acheive success? In my opinion, there are three main keys-a clear objective, strong will power and diligence.First, it is very important to set a goal before you start. No one can be successful without a goal in his mind.Besides, you need a strong will power to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to success. Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent enough. Last but not least, everyone who want to succeed should be diligent. There is an old saying “No pains, no gains.” Most success people owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein.In conclusion, if we want to be successful, we have to master the three mian keys mentioned above. There is no shortcut to success. The three keys will assure you to realize your dream.,主题句,扩展句,终结句,主题句,扩展句,主题句,扩展句,主题句,扩展句,扩展句,主题句,终结句,06,写作模板,1.讨论观点类文章： Nowadays,there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon that . Different people have different views on_. Some people think that_, others argue that _. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that _. For one thing,I firmly believe that _. For another,_. Just think of_. Taking all these factors into consideration(Form what has been discussed above),we may safely come to the conclusion that_. Only if_can we _, just as the saying goes, _.,2.提出问题类作文：It is quite natural for _to ponder over the question of whether to _.Many _will choose not to_,generally for three reasons.On the one hand,_.On the other hand,_.Most importantly,_.Nevertheless, oher people adopt a completely different view,thinking that_. Moreover,(此外) they further argue that_.From what we have discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that the question quite depends on personal choice.In my own eyes,_.,3.评论反驳类作文Until recently most people hold hostile attitudes towards_.Some people view it as_while others consider it_.Recent research,however,shows that_is of great benefit in many respects._,scientists tell us,_.Surprisingly enougu,_also_.The most remarkable thing about_is that_.Now we can draw the conclusion that_.I strongly advocate that we should make good use of it to_.,4.解决办法类作文If the Chinese people even want to improve their life quality, the problem of _ has to be solved. With more and more people _, this problem is becoming more and more serious in terms of scale and scope. First of all,_. Whats more,_. Only when all the people stop pursuing personal interests at the price of _ can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation. The _ is of great importance to every member of our society. As long as the government, society and individuals make joint efforts, a sound solution is not far away.,5.分析原因类作文During the last decade, there has been a steady rise in the number of _. In detail,_. Three reasons, in my mind, account for this social phenomenon. First and foremost,_. Moreover,_. In addition,_. As a result,_. Personally, I firmly believe that the problem derives from _. Thus, if the government make relevant policies and take relevant measure to _, the problem can be readily solved in _.,6.图表类作文What is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above indicates that in recent years, more and more people pay attention to _. The number of those who _ has increased _, and furthermore,_. There are two factors responsible for the changes. In the first place,_. Moreover,_. Yet, it is noticeable that _. From the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that_. It is possible that in the future, the tendency will_.,07,范文学习,Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.(2017),Computer for SaleAs I am about to graduate and leave the campus, I am going to sell my personal laptop at a low price.It is a Lenovo ThinkPad that I bought in June, 2015. It is not big, but very functional. It has a four-core CPU, an independent display card of 2G, a hard disk of 500G and a screen of 15.6 inches.For the last two years, the laptop has served as my faithful aid and helped me finish most of my assignments and my thesis. There has appeared no fault in the process. I owe so much to it. But as my workplace has already offered me a more advanced working laptop, I find there is no necessity for me to have two. And I know that there must be some of my schoolmates who are more in need of the ThinkPad. Therefore, I determined to sell it. I bought the laptop at the price of 3500 yuan. Now I will sell it at 1500 yuan or less. Anyone interested can contact me via email, and my mailbox is *.,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. (2016),Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice，which is truly a tough choice. Students opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to start a business of your own, but others take the attitude that finding a job is the best choice influencing their future.As to myself, I prefer the latter view. An opportunity to start a business exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me. In my view, With the competition in the job market becoming increasingly fierce for college graduates， some ambitious students have tried their hands at launching their own businesses. Over the years，there have been many successful cases of student entrepreneurship and such attempts should be encouraged and promoted by both the universities and the society at large. Whats more ,College students who start businesses are pioneers，among whom will be born Chinas future business leaders. Faced with unknown challenges， they are audacious enough to embark on a perilous journey while most of their peers enjoy stable salaries by working as white-collars at high-end office buildings.All in all, the essential difference between the students who find a job or those students who create their own businesses is that the former are docile followers whereas the latter are aggressive trailblazers. For this reason， business-launching college graduates are more admirable， and thus they command our deep respect.,Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family member upon making a memorable achievement.You should write st least 120 words but no more than 180 words. (2016),Dear my parents,This letter is to tell you my true feelings from the bottom of my heart. Although we can keep in virtual touch every day, I still feel it not enough to let you know how much I love you and how much Ive appreciated what youve done for me.In the past 20 years, you have done a lot for me. Firstly, thank you so much for bringing me up. I know how hard youve being working in the past. I can imagine how many difficulties and obstacles youve conquered. Second,I want to thank you for your good education on me. There is an old saying goes like this “parents are the first teachers to their children”. Both of you are the typical ones.The most important thing that I want to say “thank you” is for your great admiration on my own freedom. You told me to look over the horizons and to pursuit my own dreams without hesitation.I really feel that my pen fails me when I am writing this thank you letter. The only thing I hope you can do for me is to take good care of yourselves and you will be always proud of me.Yours belovedSon,Directins: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write anessay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see whathappens, go out there to make something happen.” You can citeexamples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather thanthe mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words. (2015.12),As a famous saying goes, Never go out there to see what happens,go out there to make something happen. Simple as the saying is, its meaning is profound and thought-provoking, which is meant to tell us that we aresupposed to be creative instead of acting as the onlooker. Conspicuous are the impacts of being creative and I would like toexplore the following aspects. To begin with, it is to leading a team to makeconstant progress what water is to fish, which can be best illustrated by an example concerning an extraordinarybasketball player, Yao Ming. Moreover,this kind of innovation also makes it possible for anation to promote its international statusand improve the comprehensive competitiveness. From my perspective, keeping creative is so essential thatadequate importance must be attachedto it. Only when we literally realize the key roleit plays can we become better selves in theforeseeable future.,THANK YOU,