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Discourse Markers in English Writing 英语写作中的话语标记词,长沙市一中 朱晓明,Q: How many steps do you need to put this elephant into the fridge?,Lead-in,Lead-in,Q: How many steps do you need to put this elephant into the fridge?,Step by step!,First,Second,Finally,Read passages to know more about discourse markers.Learn to use discourse markers to make your writing logical.Proper discourse markers make your writing logical, vivid and well-organized.,Aims today,Task 1,Q: What did “I” do to trick Chico back? Two days later, the parrot, Chico, returned. I tried to trick him back with food, but he would not come near me. I took his cage and put it away- still he wouldnt come. I made him a firm promise that I would let him out every day if the weather was nice as long as he did come back. He flew onto my shoulder.,Task 1,Two days later, the parrot Chico returned. First I tried to trick him back with food, but he would not come near me. Then I took his cage and put it away - still he wouldnt come. Finally, I made him a firm promise that I would let him out every day if the weather was nice as long as he did come back. At last, he flew onto my shoulder.,Task 2,Each of the U.S. manned space exploration projects had specific major goals. 1 , the Mercury project was designed to test whether or not human beings could survive and function in outer space. In addition, the Mercury project tested rockets with the new Mercury space capsule, which could hold one person. 2 , the Gemini project was intended to find out whether two people could work in the weightless environment of space.,For example,As another example,Q: How many major goals did the US manned space exploration projects undertake?,One way of doing this was by having Gemini astronauts take spacewalks. 3 , they floated outside their spacecraft in a spacesuit, connected to it by the chain. Gemini astronauts also tried out new flying skills. For example, some astronauts flew two spacecraft extremely close together; this procedure was called rendezvous. On some Gemini flights, astronauts physically linked two spacecraft together. This linking, or space docking, was a major goal of the Gemini program.,Task 2,That is,4 , the Apollo project, with three astronauts, had the goal of testing spacecraft and skills so that people could actually fly to the Moon and land on it. Other goals included performing scientific experiments on the lunar surface and collecting rocks for study on Earth.,Task 2,Finally,Q: What are the tips for being successful?SuccessSome people succeed, while others may not. 1 . Having proper motivation is not optional - it is another key to success. 2 That is to say, when you really have a thirst for success, you put your performance under the microscope to make sure that every little thing you do works towards your goal.,Task 3,D,G,Another quality that helps people succeed is creativity - thinking about things in new and different waysWhere others see failure, they see possibility. 3 Where others see a closed door, they see an open window. They might be successful with a little creativity，but the most successful people are the most creative ones,Task 3,C,Reading about successful people is another to success. By doing so, you will learn about how other people have achieved success. Many successful people have the same drive and same qualities. 4 While you may not be the next Bill Gates, you may become just as, if not more famous.,Task 3,F,In addition, practicing is also important if you want to succeed because practice makes perfect. Practice every day at whatever career you are in, as it will help you see yourself and business begin to grow. 5 Your colleagues will be happy to work with you, and your boss will give you more responsibility. Success is yours for the taking! Cheers!,Task 3,B,What is the discourse marker? Discourse markers refer to linking words or phrases which can show the between what speaker is saying and what has already been said. Sometimes they can also reflect the speakers .,Summary,connection,attitude,并列递进关系: bothand, as well as, accordingly, in this way,转折对比关系: yet, but, thought, even so, however, once regardless of,因果关系: so, due to, for this reason, in view of,概括总结关系: in brief, to sum upon the whole, in conclusion,时间顺序关系: first, second, following this, afterwards, previously, meanwhile, later, since then, to begin with,解释例证关系: for example, in this situation, as to, in particular, namely, according to,My Mind map,假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Hunter发来e-mail说他特别痴迷于中国文化尤其是唐诗宋词，但是对于一些诗词只是死记硬背，而对于其中的含义却很难理解，希望你能够给他回一封电子邮件提一些建议。注意：1.词数 100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Writing task,Write an email to Mr. Hunter within 10 minutes with proper discourse markers.,Writing task,Dear Hunter, Im more than glad to know you develop a taste for Chinese culture. To be honest, it is normal you feel it difficult to understand Tang and Song poems. First of all, to understand a poem, reading and reciting are a must. Only in this way can you appreciate its beauty. Additionally, it would be helpful if you refer to the Internet and learn the background to have a better understanding of its hidden meaning.,My edition,As is often the case, it was typical of Chinese poets to express their opinions and concerns about politics and society. Therefore, getting to know the experiences of the poet must contribute to understanding of his works. Hoping you make progress and have fun in learning Chinese poems!,My edition,Homework:,1. Polish your writing according to the evaluation criteria, and write it down on your exercise books. 2. Finish the monthly exercise paper.,
