新人教版九年级英语第四单元写作指导ppt课件.ppt

,Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.,Section B Writing,Talking,3a,Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies. Then talk with a partner about your changes.,Appearance: tall, short, fat, thin, slim,strong, young, old, straight hair, curly hair, long hair, short hair, a medium body,Talking,Personality: humorous,outgoing,serious, funny, smart, friendly, shy, helpful, quiet,active,brave,unfriendly. hobbies: read cartoon/ novel, sing,dance,playfootball/ basketball,Talking,What makes a good composition?,Discussion,写作步骤,审题立意定主人称时态用词得当检查修改,写作时,找关键词由词组句组句成段扩句成段,Content,Everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整),Structure,Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾)Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)Proper linking words between sentences（使用恰当的连接词）,练一练,Write sentences by using used to:,1. I/have curly hair/have straight hairI used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair.2.I/so fat/thinI used to be so fat,but now I am thin.,练一练,Write sentences by using used to:,3.I/shy/outgoing and braveI used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave.4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western cultureI used to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western culture.,练一练,Write sentences by using used to:,1. 我过去是走路上学的。I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.2.我过去喜欢跑步，但现在我喜欢打篮球。I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.,Proper linking words between sentences（连接词）,first, second, third (the most important)firstly, secondly, thirdly (finally), 首先，第二，第三,表示举例子：for example 例如Takefor example 以为例such as 比如like 像,表示转折：however (but)然而(但是),表示个人观点：In my view 在我看来In my opinion 我认为As far as I am concerned 就我而言,Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one, and why?,3b,Try to write threeparagraphs. （总分总）,Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life.,Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened.,Paragraph 3: To express your own ideas,How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to_.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_ _.This is the most important change because_.,How Ive Changed！My life has changed a lot in the past few years. I used to have so much time, but now Im too busy. I always used to get up early and stay in school all day. Before I go to high school, I used to spend lots of time playing games with my friends, but I just dont have the time anymore. In the evening, I used to watch TV or play computer games, but now I have to study.,I love music, and my father used to take me to concerts. But I still really love my present life. The biggest change in my life was Im more busy than before, because I went into high school and I have morehomework.,