八年级英语写作复习ppt课件.pptx
M,8,U,Writing:An expectation for my future school life,3,(Revision),Warm-up,Get to know Sally through pictures,buildings,garden,playground,dining hall,library, swimming pool .,interesting,colorful ,classmates,teachers ,surf the Internet,play chess,What will your high school life be like ?,1. There will be a large library in my future school. 2. I will listen to music in my spare time.3. They will get along well with me.,There will be a big library in my future school. I can read my favorite books there. There will also be a large swimming pool. I can go swimming with my classmates. Courses will be interesting and colorful and I can do different things, such as surf the Internet, play chess and so on. By the way, I will get along well with my classmates and teachers. I love my future school life !,A possible version,There will be,There will be,I can,I can,I can,添加标题,spelling mistakes,similar structures,simple sentences,few linking words,Good ?,How to write a better composition ?,3. (连) Connect the sentences,2. (列) List the outline,4. (润) Polish the article,An expectation for my future school life,5. (检) Check the mistakes,1. (审) Analyze the information,三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“I expect my future school life ”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。,1. (审) Analyze the information,I expect my future school life I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything will be new to me._,outline,I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything will be new to me.,The description of my future school life,Your expectation for the future,2. (列) List the outline,Beginning:,Body:,campus, relationscourses, activities,Ending:,Strategies(策略),Advanced words and phrases(高级词汇短语),Abundant sentence patterns(丰富的句式),4. (润) Polish the article,Proper linking words(恰当的连接词),Phrases come first(短语优先)Eg. I think having a large library will be important for us.,be of great importance,in my spare time, after class,to get useful information, with the help of, luckily, ,Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式),合二为一 有头脑,巧用谚语 多一招,会用with 水平高,主动不如 被动巧,陈述不如 倒装妙,3,5,1,2,4,1. 陈述不如倒装妙 ！,Eg. Only if we have a large library, will we enrich our school life.,2. 主动不如被动巧 ！,Eg. A swimming pool is expected to be built in my senior high school.,3. 会用with水平高！,Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式),Eg. With many flowers planted, our school will take a new look.,4. 合二为一 有头脑！,Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式),Eg. I will get along well with my classmates and make new friends, who share the same interests with me.,5. 巧用谚语多一招！,Eg. As a saying goes, “Life lies in movement.” so I hope there will be a large gym in my future school.,Lets write,三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“I expect my future school life ”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。,I expect my future school life I will study in a senior high school soon. Everything will be new to me._,Lets be a judge(裁判),Total _,A better vision :, I will study in a high school soon. Everything will be new to me. In a totally/completely new learning environment, Ill be very excited and curious(好奇的). I will attach my attention to the beautiful campus with a large and neat dining hall and a grassy playground. What makes me really thrilled(极度激动的) is that there will be a bright library where I can acquire(获得) some knowledge. In the school, I will be on good terms with(与相处融洽) my classmates and make some new friends who share the same interests with me. Moreover, interesting and colorful courses will also be offered so that I will get a good opportunity(机会) to develop other skills. In my spare time, I can also participate in(参加) some after-school activities, such as surfing the Internet and so on. Fruitful(硕果累累的) junior high school life is coming to an end and much more joyful senior high school life will soon unfold(铺开) in front of me. I believe I will make great progress and embrace a bright future.,Individual work:,Correct the mistakes in your writing and thenwrite it again.,Group work:,Judge others writings and help them improve their writings or learn something wonderful from others writings.,Homework,What will your future life be like?,2,0,1,9,Thank you !,
