九年级中考英语总复习作文讲评课件(共15张).pptx
,English Composition 英语作文,English Composition,书面表达：近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引起了热烈讨论。作为一名中学生，请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文，呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。 1.见面跟人打招呼 2.与同学友好相处 3.保持教室及社区环境卫生 4.帮助家人做力所能及的事 5.在公共场合遵守秩序 6.如果友人不遵守规则，你会 要求: 书写规范，语句通顺，行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 短文应包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，但可适当发挥。,2018年九年级模拟考试英语作文,提示词：话题 issue全国文明城市社区the national civilized city遵守公共秩序obey public order,书面表达：近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引,绝望型,抄写型,奋斗型,精英型,绝望型抄写型奋斗型精英型,Problems in your writing,要点不全词数太少无头无尾缺少过渡语法错误,书写潦草卷面涂改,Problems in your writing 要点不全书,书面整洁干净，行文连贯通顺，句式多样，语法基本无误或有少量语法错误。,Enjoy the following compositions.,书面整洁干净，行文连贯通顺，Enjoy the follow,We had better help our parents do the housework which we can do. (季建雯)Its our duty to protect our environment. (周晶美)We should do something we can do to builda national civilized city. (郭爽)Its a good idea to get on well with others. (姚春情)Its important to keep our community clean. (季雅杰),Enjoy the following sentences.,We had better help our parents,评分标准：第五档（ 13-15分）能写明全部要点，文章中语法无误，行文连贯且通顺，表达清楚且丰富。 第四档（10-12分）能写明全部或大部分内容要点，文中有少量语法错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（7-9分） 能写明部分内容要点,文中有较多语法错误，尚能达意。第二档（4-6分） 只能写出少部分内容要点，文中有许多语法错误，只有个别句子可读。第一档（0-3分） 只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分；写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。,评分：_ 理由： _,Version 1: First, students say hello when they people. Second, students are friendly to anybody. Third, students should keep the environment is clean in class and in community. Fourth, students have better help parents to do housework. In public, we must obey public order. Finally, when you met somebody not to obey order. You must stop his. and you can tell he right is action.,7,评分标准：评分：_ 理由： _,Version 2: English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. They can help us learn English well. It can also help open our minds and make our school life colorful. Weve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks. We also learnt a lot about cultures around the world. My favorite person is Spud Webb. Ive learned a lot from him.,评分标准：第五档（ 13-15分）能写明全部要点，文章中语法无误，行文连贯且通顺，表达清楚且丰富。 第四档（10-12分）能写明全部或大部分内容要点，文中有少量语法错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（7-9分） 能写明部分内容要点,文中有较多语法错误，尚能达意。第二档（4-6分） 只能写出少部分内容要点，文中有许多语法错误，只有个别句子可读。第一档（0-3分） 只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分；写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。,评分：_ 理由： _,13,Version 2: As a middle school student, we should do something we can do to build the national civilized city. Here is some advice for us. First of all, when we meet someone, we should say hello to them. And we should get on well with our classmates. Second, we had better keep our classroom and community clean. Because we should protect our environment. At last, we must obey public order in public places. If someone against the rules, we should stop him and tell him about the rules. If everyone can do something, our city will become better and better.,Version 2:评分标准：评分：_,语法知识混乱，运用不够准确代词:We must stop he from doing it . You should get on well with you classmates. 时态: I believe our city get better and better.主谓一致:If someone dont obey the rules,词性：We mustnt against the rules.习惯搭配: We should be friendly with others. We should keep clean the classroom .,him,will get better and better.,break,doesnt,to,Typical mistakes(典型错误),your,keep the classroom clean.,语法知识混乱，运用不够准确him will get bett,句型结构 Chinglish 现象 I very like Tianjin.When we at schoolIf have people doesnt obey public order,are at school,like Tianjin very much.,If someone doesnt obey public order,句型结构 Chinglish 现象are at school,Recently, Tianjin is building the civilized city. At our school, we are talking about this issue. Then what can we do to help build the national civilized city?First, I think it is polite to say hello when we meet someone. And also we should get on well with our classmates. Second , keep our classrooms and community clean so that we can live in a comfortable environment. And as a student, we should help parents do something we can do. Whats more, when we are in public, we should always obey public order. And if someone doesnt obey public order, its our duty to stop him and tell him to do the right thing. In my opinion, Tianjin is our hometown, so lets try our best to make it a better place and help build the national civilized city.,英语作文万能的三段式“ 观点-事例-总结“,Recently, Tianjin is building,Standard of a good composition,No mistakes没有错误,Enough content内容充足,Fine language语言丰富,Beautiful handwriting书写工整,Standard of a good composition,1.You should do2.You had better do3.Its a good idea to do4.Its better to do5.Its important/necessary to do6.Lets try our best to do 7.Its our duty to do,Give advice（提建议）,You are supposed to do,Try to express in a different way,1.You should do Give adv,书面表达：为了响应天津市创建全国卫生城市的号召，我校开了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英文征文活动。请你以“The greener city, the healthy life”为题，根据下列提示信息，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 骑车出行，减少空气污染不随地吐痰, 不在公共场所吸烟垃圾入箱,保持城市卫生 多种树,保护自然环境 （你的观点）,Practice makes perfect.,书面表达：为了响应天津市创建全国卫生城市的号召，我校开了“绿,九年级中考英语总复习-作文讲评课件(共15张PPT),
