托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享.doc

托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享 考生在备考独立口语时常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为自己批改答案。今天给大家带来托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享,希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享：志愿者帮助老人本期托福独立口语高频话题What would you like to do when you work as a volunteer to help elderly people?学生对此话题的表述答案If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Because, firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talent of old people. Many old people have great talent, some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have an opportunity to show that talent. It will make them more confident and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, If I throw a party for them. They will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Because old people are always very lonely. They really need someone to be their side and to listen to them.资深讲师批改意见发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)1 party2 colorful语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)1 Because, firstlyFirstly2 Because old peopleOld people表达部分存在的问题(Expression)1 some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well.some of them can sing or dance very well2 are always very lonelycan get very lonely此高频话题高分口语模板分享If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talents of old people. Many old people have great talents, some of them can sing or dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have a place to show their talents. It will make them more confident, and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, if I throw a party for them, they will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Old people can get very lonely. They really need someone to be at their side and to listen to them.托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享：安静的学习工作环境本期托福独立口语高频话题When they are studying or working, some people prefer to listen to music while others prefer to stay in a quiet place. Which do you prefer and why?学生对此话题的表述答案I prefer to stay in a quiet place to study. Because only in that way, I can be more concentreated on my studies. As a law school student, I have too many legal terms and provisions to recite. Music, noisy or things like that may divert my attention. Music for me is more like an entertainment. When it plays the music that I like, I may be immersed in it. So its not a good choice for me to listen to music when Im study.资深讲师批改意见发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)1 study语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)1 noisynoise2 When Im studyWhen I study表达部分存在的问题(Expression)1 I prefer to stay in a quiet place to study. Because only in that way, I can be more concentreated on my study.I prefer to study in a quiet place, because thats the only way I can concentrate on my studies.2 too manymany3 recitememorize4 When it playsWhen I play此高频话题高分口语模板分享I prefer to study in a quiet place, because thats the only way I can concentrate on my studies. As a law school student, I have many legal terms and provisions to recite/memorize. Music, noise or things like that may divert my attention. Music for me is more like entertainment. When I play the music that I like, I maybe immersed in it. So it is not a good idea for me to listen to music when I study.托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享：如何保护环境?本期托福独立口语高频话题An environmental group is planning to organize an activity to protect the environment. What activity would you suggest?学生对此话题的表述答案I think the most significant activity the environmental group should do is to plant more trees worldwide. It is reported that the desert has occupied a fourth of the earth landing surface. And this process is increasing at a alarming speed. As we know, planting tree can reduce the erosion to green area by wind and soil from the deserts. Because the root of green trees can strengthen the sand in the deserts. By doing this, we can protect the environmental conditions both in the cities and deserts.资深讲师批改意见发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)1 worldwide2 deserts3 erosion语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)1 to green areain green areas2 because (delete)表达部分存在的问题(Expression)1 landing surfaceland surface2 by wind and soilcaused by wind and soil此高频话题高分口语模板分享I think the most significant activity the environmental group should do is to plant more trees worldwide. It is reported that the deserts have occupied a fourth of the earths land surface. And this process is increasing at an alarming speed. As we know, planting trees can reduce the erosion in gree areas caused by wind and soil from the desserts. The roots of the green trees can strenghten the sand in desserts. By doing this, we can protect the environmental conditioin both in cities and desserts.托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享：拯救地球环境本期托福独立口语高频话题We are facing serious environmental problems. What can we do to save the planet?学生对此话题的表述答案Facing serious environmental problems, we should take many measures. One effective way is to improve the education standard, because education is a akin to some of these problem. We should inform more people with the importance of environment and the effective way to protect it. And another way is to encourage people to live in environment friendly ways. For example, people should plant trees in their spare time and take public transport instead of driving private cars. So our environment will be better.资深讲师批改意见发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)1 problems2 plant3 trees4 measures语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)1 inform more people with the importance of environment and the effective way to protect itinform more people of the importance of the environment and effective ways to protect it2 education is akin to some of these problemeducation is akin to some of these problems表达部分存在的问题(Expression)1 Facing serious environmental problems, we should take many measuresWhile we are facing serious environmental problems, we need to take a lot of/many measures2 environment friendlyencironmentally friendly此高频话题高分口语模板分享While we are facing environmental problems, we should take a lot of measures to solve these problems. First, we need better education. We need to inform people the importance of the environment and the ways that we can protect it. We need to teach people how they can contribute to protect the environment. We also need to encourage people to live environmentally friendly lives and develop environmentally friendly habits. We need to encourage people to plant trees in their spare time, and we need to encourage people to take public transport instead of driving, so the environment will be better. By educating people and encourage them to live encironmentally friendly lives. We can save the planet.托福独立口语高频话题资深讲师批改分享：互联网改变生活本期托福独立口语高频话题How has the availability of the worldwide Internet changed peoples life?学生对此话题的表述答案on my daily life, I would say the increasing of ability of internet is the most important advancement in our life. It makes peoples lives ever more convenient and colorful. For example, when I need to find the answer of the queston, it is as simple as putting the key words into the search box, and then I could check all the information below the box. By contrast, it is hard to find the exact piece of information from hundreds of pages in traditional way. Secondly, it provides us sufficient resource to support our daily lives, such as news on the internet and the latest results from the research.资深讲师批改意见发音部分需注意的几个词(Pronunciation)1 it2 makes语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)1 the increasing of ability of internetthe increasing capabilities of the internet2 it is hard to find the exact piece of information from hundreds of pages in traditional wayit is hard to find specific piece of information in the traditional way of looking through hundreds of pages表达部分存在的问题(Expression)1 I could check all the information below the box.I can look through all the information below the search bar.2 latest result from the researchlatest research results.此高频话题高分口语模板分享The internet is the most important advancement in mordern life. The internet makes peoples lives ever more colorful and convenient. When searching for information, we can use a search engine where we all have to do is to put the key words into the search bar and then look through the information below the search bar to find what we need. It used to be much harder to find specific information the traditional way of looking through hundreds of pages and books. The internet not only makes research more convenient for us, but it keeps us updated about the news all over the world. It also keeps us updated on different kinds of research. Internet access changed many peoples lives in many crucial ways.