雅思写作表现力如何增强.doc

雅思写作表现力如何增强 雅思写作成绩的高低和雅思写作表现力的强弱有很大的关系，今天给大家带来雅思写作表现力如何增强,希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作表现力如何增强一、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。这是语言考试，不是专业考试，提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上，是*的表现力上!例如：1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.二、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语，这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握，但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。例如：Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.Revision: The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.2) Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One workers plan eliminates tardiness.3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.三、尽量运用主动语态。之所以要这样做，是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动，什么时候该用被动。用错了，当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。例如：1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。这样的具体描写可以让*看起来更具说服力，当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。例如：1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单，生动。例如：1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.以上即是雅思写作词汇量扩充以及运用的技巧，同学们在复习备考雅思考试的过程中，决不能放松对雅思写作词汇的学习，万丈高楼平地起，只有精确熟练的掌握雅思写作技巧词汇的应用，才可能在雅思考试的道路上跑的更快!雅思写作模板之问题解决型临近雅思考试，很多同学们在到处找雅思写作模板。不可否认，雅思写作模板的确能在我们临时抱佛脚的时候发挥适当的作用。但是如果把写作完全寄希望于雅思写作模板，那么你需要有逃过阅卷老师火眼金睛的运气。为了照顾一部分复习不是很踏实的同学，在这里整理了一个雅思写作模板中的问题解决型，希望那些感觉自己还没复习好的同学来认真的学习参考。雅思写作模板：问题解决型Recently, 现象is increasing at an amazing rate, which has a strong influence on our life and society. What factors lead to this disturbing situation and how we adopt measures to solve this problem has become a major concern to many people. In my view, the following reasons can be listed to explain my analysis.The first reason that can be seen by every person is that 原因1 . 解释1 . 例释1 . 例释1 .What is also worth noticing is that原因2 . 解释2 . 例释1 . 例释2 .The third and very important reason is that原因3 . 解释3 . 例释1 . 例释2 .Regarding the above reasons, I think there are some ways we should put forward to deal with this issue. For one approach, 建议1 For another, 建议2.in addition,建议3.雅思写作模板之利弊型临近雅思考试，很多同学们在到处找雅思写作模板。不可否认，雅思写作模板的确能在我们临时抱佛脚的时候发挥适当的作用。但是如果把写作完全寄希望于雅思写作模板，那么你需要有逃过阅卷老师火眼金睛的运气。为了照顾一部分复习不是很踏实的同学，在这里整理了一个雅思写作模板中的利弊型，希望那些感觉自己还没复习好的同学来认真的学习参考。雅思写作模板：利弊型In present day and age, in front of us appear plenty of problems among which 问题/现象 attract increasing attention from the general public. Although a sizable percentage of views go to the point that A说法/现象 offers us various kinds of benefits, whereas there are still others who are of the opinion that B说法/现象 results in a great many negative effect. Whether A or B +半个句子/现象is advantageous or not has become a controversial question. With both sides taken into account, we can seek some evidence in both of them.Those who favor the point that A说法/现象 has an influence on us positively give reasons as follows. To begin with, 原因1 .What follows is that原因2 .In the final, 原因3 .Others who despise the above point contend that B说法/现象S drawbacks are needed to be noticed for the following reasons. For one reason, 原因1 .For another, 原因2 .Additionally, 原因3 .Though both sides are well-grounded, they are much too one-sided. From my perspective, both A and B can not escape doing something but join hands to deal with this problem/both its strength and weakness can not be denied but instead we are supposed to take advantage of good points and avoid bad points to better serve our society.G类雅思写作Task 1备考攻略之投诉信雅思考试分为A类和G类两种模式。通常来说，以出国工作或者移民为目的的考生应该选择G类考试。A类和G类考试的区别在阅读和写作两项考试上，其中写作考试中的任务一G类与A类题型截然不同，请参见官方指南上的题型解释：从官方介绍不难看出，G类写作任务一(以下简称T1)要求考生在20分钟左右完成一篇书信的写作，考生也许会被要求去询问信息或解释某些状况。但是，具 体而言，考生可能会碰到哪些形式的书信写作呢?根据剑桥2-9八本真题以及近三年考试回顾，雅思G类T1书信类型主要包括感谢信、道歉信、投诉信、求职求 学信、邀请信、建议信和咨询求助信等七种。新东方为大家收集了G类雅思写作Task 1备考攻略：投诉信，给出相应的解题思路(即书信写作*结构)与写作句型。三、G类雅思写作Task 1备考攻略：投诉信1. 书信结构投诉信是雅思考试中最常见的一种，写信时应该重点包括三个部分。第一部分为自我介绍、投诉事由、自己的感受等;第二部分为投诉的事实与理由，具体描述当时的情形，如人物、时间、地点和原因等。指出具体问题及其所产生的后果;第三部分可分为提出个人要求或者建议，清晰说明读信人可以做的补救措施，希望有关部门和人士做出相应的改进，以及提出愿望，希望早日得到答复。2. 常用句型1) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with .2) There are some problems with that I wish to bring to your attention.3) I regret to inform you that .4) You can imagine my disappointment when I discovered that _.5) You can imagine my feelings when I realized that this would mean .6) Even though I telephoned you about , .7) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.8) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.9) We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.